leora (2)Admitted to NYU, USC, and all the Universities of California, including UC Berkeley and UCLA with scholarship offers

“I am so pleased with my decision to work with Paul (Pouya). I had rough ideas of what I wanted to include in my personal statements but I did not know how to construct it. I was a bit hesitant working with him over the phone rather than in person but needless to say I’m confident that I received better service and commitment from Pouya than anyone else. He asked me questions and built on my ideas, and created an artfully crafted essay. Pouya’s passion shines through the phone, and he is always coming up with improvements. The style and language that was used impressed me,  totally transforming my draft for the better. The first draft he sent me was beyond my expectations, although he did continue to work with me until it reached perfection. Turning in my applications after only one year of community college, I did not have a high chance of acceptance, but with my essays, I submitted my application with a renewed sense of confidence. I am ecstatic to say that with Pouya’s help I got accepted into every school I to which I applied, including UCLA, USC, NYU, UCSD, UCI, UCSB, UC Berkeley, which along with the other UCs, offered me a full scholarship.” – Leora G.

berkeleyAdmitted to several Universities of California, including UC Berkeley and UCLA

“I transferred all the way from a state university to a community college because I’ve always wanted to attend a University of California. As an international student, writing is not my strength therefore I had a hard time drafting my personal statement. When I saw AdmissionMax’s flier on the bulletin board at my community college, I was interested because I needed help from professionals who know everything about admissions. I met Paul, the admissions expert, and brainstorming with him about what we could write in the personal statement. He returned the draft to me within a short span of time and I was surprised and more than satisfied with the result. I am thrilled to have been accepted to UC Berkeley, which is my dream school. I will keep recommending AdmissionMax to my friends.” – D. Yang

omeed (2)-001Admitted to all the Universities of California, including UC Berkeley and UCLA

“Working with AdmissionMax has been a wonderful experience. Paul had me explain my story as well as the goals I hope to achieve. He quickly understood the type of guy I am and how we should professionally convey my narrative in a manner that would please any admissions office. Although I felt that I had a strong essay, Paul highlighted that just like anything there is always room for improvement. Throughout the process Paul took his time to teach me skills that are vital to writing a phenomenal essay. After working with Paul not only did my essay improve but so did my overall writing. I was amazed at how dramatically my essay transformed from a good one to an incredible one. With his help, I am proud to say that I have been accepted to the number one public university in the country, UC Berkeley, as well as UCLA.” – Omeed M.

uclaAdmitted to all schools to which she applied, including UC Berkeley & UCLA with full scholarship offers

“I contacted AdmissionMax looking for someone who would help me with a unique situation that I was in and wanted someone who would help me out with my ideas, not just someone who would write the essays for me without hearing my thoughts. We worked together as a team, which most essay aids do not offer, and in the end, my essays felt personal and detailed with information I wanted to share. Most writing experts do not really care about your story and just want to get paid to do the job and be done with it. Paul, on the other hand, held my hand every step of the way, brainstorming with me, giving his input and listening to my opinions. He was able to transform my essays from mediocrity to extraordinary. To be honest, I didn’t know if I wanted to invest in having someone help me with my personal statements, but I am SO happy that I did. I am pleased to say that with Paul’s help, I have been admitted into all the schools to which I applied, including UCLA, UC Berkley, UCSD and UCSB, USC, The New School, and Loyola Marymount University. I was admitted with a full scholarship to UCLA to study a competitive major that has a 3% acceptance rate. I needed someone who knew what they were doing and I am happy that I found Paul’s services. Not only did I accomplish my goals, but along the way I gained a friend and mentor in Paul.” – Tiffany H.

uscAdmitted to 3 Universities of California, University of Michigan, and USC with a scholarship

“I needed a well-written personal statement in order to apply to top tier four-year universities across the U.S. I had the topic but I was having difficulty organizing and expressing my thoughts. A friend of mine recommended AdmissionMax.  The admissions expert harnessed his professional, intellectual, and creative experience to help me with the strategy and narrative of my admissions essays. After submitting the first drafts to him, he returned them to me within two days revised, organized, corrected, and considerably improved. He patiently explained why he cut out and added much of the material so I can understand the strategy being used. Within a week we finalized the personal statements and I applied to 12 top ranking universities, I was accepted by 10 universities including three Universities of California, University of Michigan, and USC. I decided to attend USC after being admitted to the Marshall School of Business with a generous scholarship. My decision to hire AdmissionMax was well worth the small investment and I believe this has changed my future.” – Z. Khan

1271990_10151875523561970_129512095_o (2)Admitted to several Universities of California, including UCSD

“As a transfer student, I had a lot riding on my application but I was having a tough time writing my personal statement in manner that reflected all my hard work and future potential. I knew it had to be perfect since getting into the Universities of California is so competitive these days, and yet, I had difficulty organizing my thoughts and I just didn’t know what the admissions committees expected. After a few weak and very inadequate drafts, I decided to get some outside help and found AdmissionMax via the Internet. We brainstormed every detail of the essay’s message and theme, and their editing was instrumental in the essay’s strength. I was pleasantly surprised that my essay was completed in less than a week and it had matured wonderfully. My ideas flowed smoothly and the organization and message of the essay was powerful. A few months later, I was proudly accepted into nearly all Universities in California and began my university career at UC San Diego. I owe a big debt of gratitude to the team at AdmissionMax.” – Bobby H.